10/06/29 14:18:23 TdJ4K3Gy0
2008年自由英作文
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(Your suggestion sounds very interesting, but)
(1)I think that those subjects you are mentioned are a bit
difficult for us high school students.
(So, I would rather suggest that)
(2)we should treat more daily problems we are directly
involved in instead of national or global issues.
どうですかね？(2)のtreatはdeal withにすべきですね。
それ以外に何かあったら指摘して下さい。