08/01/04 15:59:09 c6E/LIw4
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これだと、｢わかってまーす。今作成中だからちょっと待ってね。｣という、現在の作成プロセスを前提にした答えになるかもしれません。
今のプロセスじゃ駄目です、まずジムさんから素案を出してください、と言いたいのなら、それを明確にした方がいいですよ。
ちょっと手を加えてみますので、よければお使いください。
Dear Jim-san,
Although you have agreed to the procedure of policy statement creation above, I'd like to propose another one.
I think it's better you yourself create the draft statement at first,
because bbspink is owned by you and the statement defines your responsibility.
In addition, I think the statement originated by you can make bbspink users understand your thought further and exactly,
and make your friends in 2-channel relieved. Then they can help you on bbspink operation easily.
Many people are waiting for your own words.
Best regards,