12/07/06 15:20:58.48 kBmdUW8nO
自由英作文の添削お願いします。
20点満点でお願いします。
暇なときにしている、または打ち込んでいる趣味やスポーツについて説明しなさい。という問題です。
以下が私の解答です。
I always go for a walk when I have flee time.
First of all,walking makes our body good condition.I am not good at sports,but walking is not so hard activity that I can do it easily.
However,I have a more important reason I like walking.
walking outside, sinning from the sun and comfortable wind holds my body.
They makes me forget my worries and heal my wounded heart in daily life.
That is why I go for a walk.