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[実作例]
You will often be asked what you love best just after you confess your preference for music or movie or something in your talk with someone.
You will find it considerably hard to answer the question if you try to be serious about it.
If you admit that you love music or movies at all, you are sure to have a long list of your favorites. And to select one from them
means that you will have to give up all the rest.
[評価]
25点満点で20点くらい。文法的には減点しにくいが、まだ日本語の語順に引きずられていて、英語の発想になりきっていない。もう少し「骨格→肉付け」
の方向性を立てる習慣を身につければ、もっとコンパクトな英語らしい表現ができるようになるはずである。今後が大いに期待できると思う。