12/06/14 18:45:06.45 /Fhpkjjs0
>>332続き（同じものを2度コピーしてしまい、失礼）
[添削後]
More than three hundred twenty thousand casualties are living in temporary housing or other accommodations even now.
Although the disaster areas have been restored better than in the first few weeks after the earthquake, many people
are still suffering from its aftermath. Smaller earthquakes keep happening in various parts of Japan even today.
I get frightened at every minor quake, being afraid that another enormous one might be coming again.
[評価]
10点満点で8点以上。減点対象となる大きなミスはないが、まだ日本語の表現に引きずられている部分があるように思う。