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今回の1級で出た自由英作文を書いてみました
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《お題》
Agree or disagree：Industrialization has had an overall beneficial effect on humankind.
《自分の解答》
It is true that industrialization has brought about negative effects such as the development of nuclear weapons and environmental pollution.
However, I agree with the idea that industrialization has had an overall beneficial effect on humankind.
There are three reasons to support my opinion.
The first reason is the development of transportation.
Thanks to the development of transportation systems such as trains and airplanes, we are now able to travel abroad in a short amount of time.
Not only from the perspective of individuals but also from the perspective of society, it has created an internationalization of business and has also enabled trade facilitation.
The second reason is the evolution of information devices.
The latest types of information devices such as smartphones have made it possible to instantly communicate with distant people anytime, anywhere.
Owing to such instant communication, we can easily interact with a wide variety of people.
The third reason is medical breakthroughs.
For example, the development of medical equipment has dramatically lengthened people's lifespans.
Also, diseases which were incurable in the past can now be cured, thanks to the latest medical technology.
For these reasons, even taking into account that the negative effects of industrialization certainly exists, I believe that the advantages of industrialization outweigh the disadvantages of that.