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To tell the truth, I lied to him.
I had a girlfriend at that time.
I didn't want to leave her. That's why I declined the proposal with a fake reason.
I had big troubles with this girl later, but I don't regret my decision.
I even think that having troubles together with a poor stupid girl is more difficult and nobler an enterprise than going abroad.
777の英文を評価したネイティブのプロフィール
TRomanoさん
Native speaker of American English ("Central Atlantic", according to the Dictionary of Regional American English URLﾘﾝｸ(www.daredictionary.com)).
Studied English (and Germanic) philology for five years in grad school, where I taught courses in English literature and composition.
評価
＞having troubles together with a poor stupid girl -- it is not clear what you mean to say by "having troubles together".
＞Are boy and girl united and facing a challenge together, or is each having issues with the other? I think you probably mean the latter, in which case we would not use the word "together".
＞also more difficult and nobler an enterprise strikes my ear as ungrammatical.
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大学院の先生にtogetherの使い方がネイティブと違う。
more difficult and nobler an enterprise strikes が文法的に間違っている。
大学院の英作文の先生に酷評された英文を貼って自慢する777とはいったい・・・