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6 Name：（ ´_ゝ`）Anonymous/名無しです（´・ω・｀）(United States) Date/投稿日：2012/08/07(Tue/火)15:39:34 ID:mW9ZRyKY □一言
38 would usually have "that" in it like "I hear that he..."
404 normally would have a conditional in it because it is in future tense and second person. Something like "if you turn to the right..."
527 "with the result that" is awkward and the sentence would need to be heavily reworked
316 "Occasion" is too general and is mostly used in questions or is preceded by an adjective.
427 is okay but "although" would be a more natural start.
681 two "that"s in a sentence sounds strange.
864 ends with "before long," which normally would start a phrase. Also could use a "that" after "said."
672 I would assume that finding one's own washing machine should not be very difficult.