10/04/27 05:07:49
>>124
I was half kidding. I'm a native speaker, so what >>112 said would mean
that I wouldn't be allowed to post.
>>126
American students often have the same problem. It's tough to become
a better writer without a teacher individually correcting your essays,
but I guess my main suggestion would be to read over everything you write
again, constantly asking yourself "Does this sentence add anything?"
If not, delete it. A lot of people think of writing as just a process
of creation, but revision and deletion are also very important.