09/05/12 12:55:34
明日までの宿題なのですが、添削お願いします。
一生懸命見直したのですが、すごく自信がないのでどなたか助けをまっています。
①One day, A male dog looked at the plant and spent a good time in
the big, wide grassy plain.
②Suddenly, when the sky was getting darker, Many buildings were
constructed.
③He was forced to live there.
④Varmints coughed badly because
it was very poisonous for many kind of them.
⑤He wanted to get along with a female dog since he met her.
⑥Unfortunatelly, white, strange creatures caught many varmints.
⑦彼はその危機に気づき、He looked for a female dog, but he can't find her.
（日本語の部分を、英語に直してください。お願いします。）
⑧Finally, he was caught by white,strange creatures.
⑨When he woke up,he notice that he was in that grassy plain.
⑩He could meet a female dog.
長いですが、お願いします。