08/05/03 16:20:14
Sure.
>Look, one thing I'd like to say.
This isn't wrong but sounds weird. We'd say something like, "Look, (there's) just one thing I'd like to say." or "Look, I just want to say one thing."
>English is the most important academic subject to go to college for JP.
This is awkward and I'm not sure what you mean. It's either "English is the most important (academic) subject for Japanese college students." or "Studying English is the most important reason to go to college for Japanese students."
And what the hell is up with "JP"? No one writes "Japanese" like that.
>So that's why they are suffering from severe paranoid about the language.
Contract "they are", "they're" sounds way more natural. And you meant paranoia, not paranoid.
>You JP think you can read but cannot write like me, which makes you humiliating, right?
Use "not" there instead of "cannot".
"which makes you humiliating" is wrong, it's gotta be like "which humiliates you" or "which you think is humiliating" or something like that.
>Outside, you are one of the disgustingly snooty students but you don't look an intelligent human being here in English.
Wow. No one uses the word snooty seriously anymore. I'm not exactly sure what you meant but I'm thinking something like this:
You act like arrogant elitists out there, but you're not fooling anybody here with your shitty English.
>Only one thing left for you is to insult in the only language you know.
The most natural way of saying this is probably: "So all you can do is bitch in the one language you know." or "You can't do anything but talk shit in the one language you know."
>This is what I think
That's what I think.
Just saying man, don't try to trash talk like this in English, because you can't. You just look stupid.
It'd be like me trying to brag in Japanese about how great my Japanese is, and making an ass of myself.