08/03/23 14:49:53
>>131-133ﾀｿ おまいﾀｿは非常に上手で宜しいが、推敲汁。
つかﾐｽﾀｲﾌﾟ大杉。>>131で
infuluence,infulence
theirselves
excing
trobles
nuexpected 等。
"influence"も宜しいが最近のｱﾒﾘｶ人が好きさうなのは"impact"だなや。
"run into different hurdles" →difficultかや。最近のｱﾒﾘｶ人は
"challange"も大好きだなや。
"are always filled with excitement at the curiosity"
→ filled with excitement and curiosityでだうかや？
"and they have very fertile imaginations, as well"
→ they are very imaginativeも平明でas well.
"That is how they could live in a fictional world of books."
→ あんまり上手だもんでﾁﾞﾁﾞｲ的に足を引張ると、此処の本は
fictionと限らずnon-fictionも含むがや。よつてfictionalﾄﾙ。
或はvirtual等に置換汁。更に調子込むとworldをcosmos等、
microcosmos等。
"positive effect on you" 単にpositiveではﾁｰﾄ弱い。