07/12/11 08:59:39
以下の英文で直したほうが良いところを教えて下さい。
大学に電話する内容です。
Hello.
My name is *****.
I applied for an enrollment in Spring 2008.
I'd like to make sure that you received my application forms
that I mailed and my application fee form that I faxed to you.
So, could you check whether you received them, please?
お願いします。