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55:名無しさん＠英語勉強中
09/03/16 12:31:11
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56:名無しさん＠英語勉強中
09/03/19 00:56:33
I saw "Noh plays" last night.
It was first time for me.Their action was very very beautiful.
I thought,Japanese culture is so cool in this world. We should have
confidence own country again. We have been chased American style.
So we can drink coca-cola or McDonalds or some foreign things.
But we lost beautiful own culture by contract. It is sadness.
They have still real Samurai spirit, I was impression on that.
It was thrill with me and other audience.I could spend good time last night
If you have interest for Noh plays,at all cost you see it! please.
I think you can impression so much and maybe
you will love your Japanese soul.
And we have that's soul as them,too.
Maybe we can't notice own beautiful blood and soul.
I love Samurai spirit so much,because
they had peculiar culture in this world.
And I love their brave and wish,We must follow in their footsteps.
When I read some samurai books, I was surprised their history,
Especially,Shinsen-gumi is really characteristic in Samurai,
They have severe commandment.If your enemy cut your back,you must
suicide yourself!! Can you believe it?
Always they felt death near by own. We can't feel death now,
Especially,Japan is peaceful compare with other countries.
We are so lucky nation. I always think about it.
Have a nice weekend for you!
57:名無しさん＠英語勉強中
09/03/26 19:33:09
Make a flutter couple,Norika and Jinnai.
They upped and married!It was a big news for Japanese society.
I was surprised too.She loved him too much.
So I hoped her happy and good matrimony.
But this result is too regret.
Certainly,I think they had many trouble
and they couldn't resolution trouble for each other.
I read news about Jinnai's domestic violence to Norika.
Is that truth? I think maybe Norika also interference hard to him.
So I think they have fault each other.
I thought "If you(me ) are beautiful and influential person,
but if you(me) are not happy, it is very sad".
I hope have peaceful heart always.
I have never married so I can't understand their truth.
Perhaps,marry is very difficult thing isn't it?
I hope many couples always peaceful.
58:名無しさん＠英語勉強中
09/04/02 22:03:05
895 ：Trackback(774)：2009/04/02(木) 18:46:33 ID:0OVoDWIA
エキサイト翻訳通してみたけど、英語ってだけでそのへんの女子の徒然系ダメブログと大差ない
もうちょい内容を練ってから外国人に向けて発信してもらわないと、イエローキャブ扱い
896 ：Trackback(774)：2009/04/02(木) 19:17:52 ID:ztto6oeG
読んでみて言いたいことは分かるんだけど、英文として大丈夫なのかこれ？
ところどころ微妙な気がしないでもない。もっとも、俺の英語力の方が怪しいけど。
内容については>895に同意。
59:名無しさん＠英語勉強中
09/04/04 01:30:12
URLﾘﾝｸ(www.cyworld.com)
ヒストリー見て。自分で英語うまいと思ってるのが泣ける。
60:名無しさん＠英語勉強中
09/04/08 12:10:25
↓この英文どう？
I must improve my English for my future.
Therefore I must go to school.If I can talk with foreign
colleague, I don't seek go to school.
But I don't have foreign colleague.So I must make
surrounding like that.
Certainly,just Japanese is comfortable,because
I don't need study hard for speaking with foreigners.
But maybe if I can speaking English well,I will get more
larger than my present world.
It is likes my school days.Then I could enjoy my life more.
Because I could know many scene of the world and people.
I could get many good foreign friends!
That's good memory for me.
I would like to get former my life again.
Recently, I am thinking about it always. Former my life was
so exciting and I could live full days.
My present is not bad,maybe normal,but I also want to more
exciting life compare with now,.
I could charge nice energy last year.I could get good rest.
But now,I don't need like rest.
I must challenge again for my life!
Recently, I am meeting new friends and people.
But this is so less for me yet(laugh).
I need more! I would like to live more exciting life in this year.
Maybe if I always thinking about it and take action,
I can get all. I think so.Haha!
61:名無しさん＠英語勉強中
09/04/08 12:14:34
＞I must improve my English for my future.
＞Therefore I must go to school.If I can talk with foreign
＞colleague, I don't seek go to school.
Therefore→接続副詞は通例commaをつける
with foreign colleague→可算名詞複数語尾をつけるか冠詞をつける
seek go to school→seekは裸形不定詞を選択できません
文法も滅茶苦茶だが、内容はもっと意味不明。
62:名無しさん＠英語勉強中
09/04/08 12:17:45
＞But I don't have foreign colleague.
等位接続詞は文頭におかないほうがいい。意味的に、colleagueを含む上の
文との整合性が不明。
＞So I must make surrounding like that.
soも文頭にはおかないほうがいい。surroundingはこの意味では複数形の方がいい。
makeの目的補語にPPは不適切。
これから下の文は意味がわからなすぎて断念します。
63:名無しさん＠英語勉強中
09/04/08 12:59:57
>これから下の文は意味がわからなすぎて断念します。
この日本語、変アルね。
句読点を打とう。
＞これから下の文は、意味がわからなすぎて断念します。
打ったけど、まだ意味不明アルね。
＞意味がわからなすぎて
意味が分かり辛いので
＞これから下の文は、意味が分かり辛いので断念します。
となりましたアルね。
中国からの留学生アル私があなたの日本語、添削したアルね。
64:名無しさん＠英語勉強中
09/04/08 13:21:18
>>63
ナイス！！ｗｗｗ
65:名無しさん＠英語勉強中
09/04/08 14:45:39
日本語もろくにしゃべれない馬鹿が人様の英語を添削して得意げになってんじゃねーぞボケ
66:名無しさん＠英語勉強中
09/04/08 16:27:48
>>63
>中国からの留学生アル私があなたの日本語、添削したアルね。
あなた日本語うまいいけない。中国人民反日する美しい。あなた愛国者ない。処罰の有利ｗ
67:金玉儿
09/04/08 17:57:57
>>66
おまえの日本語には、助詞がないぞｗ
＞中国からの留学生アル私があなたの日本語、添削したアルね。
↓
中国からの留学生である私が、あなたの日本語を添削したね。
「アル」はいらないｗ
幼稚園から日本語の勉強をはきはきとやり直せ！！
68:名無しさん＠英語勉強中
09/04/08 20:58:50
URLﾘﾝｸ(ameblo.jp)
↑この英語ブログにはそんな英文がたくさん
69:名無しさん＠英語勉強中
09/04/08 21:02:18
I want to consider mainly economy, finance, and politics.
この文って間違ってないじゃん。
70:金玉儿
09/04/08 21:08:30
おまえらの貧弱な英語力でも発見できる低レベルのブログがあるのか？
それはよかったな、おめでとう。
71:名無しさん＠英語勉強中
09/04/09 19:44:11
↓次の英文の文法の誤りを指摘し、文章の内容を説明せよ
I came to Kasumgaseki this evening.
Here is unique place isn't it?
Maybe I hate here when if I must work.（laugh）Tonight I will meet my friends at there.
I am thinking if I can working with people of ministries and government on Kasumigaseki.
It's difficult for me yet.I have interest of system of Kasumigaseki.
For example why the Ministry of health and Welfare lost our pension.
I want to know that's truth.I already know that now.But I think many misterious things mriggle here.
It's too much.We can't know things.So I think here is factory of big trouble.
For example from foreign countries pressure and makes somd strange policy.
We always just obey for government but if you can know truth and build relationship with important people,
it is so fantastic. I want to get it in my future.I know some ministries and government offices people.
But they don't know real truth of Japan or world system.They can't working when if they can know it?
I don't know.I want to have relation with important people with my wisdom.
Maybe it's so fun!I can seeing new world but this imagenation is just my delusion yet.
And my life is too long.So I can realize many challenges.You too.
So the life is wonderful.Hahaha.
72:名無しさん＠英語勉強中
09/04/09 19:56:08
>>71
支離滅裂すぎて難しい…日本語に直すのが。なんとなくは分かるが
73:名無しさん＠英語勉強中
09/04/09 20:02:53
でもこの英文書いている人間は
自分は前向きで英語もガンバッテまーすということを
アピールしているし、
今年の夏にはニューヨーク証券取引所に旅行に行くことを考えているんだよね
74:名無しさん＠英語勉強中
09/04/10 00:23:20
こういう英語の文法を直すと作文力身につくもな。